A rat up his pant leg

In a Cowtech break room, Tommy gets a pleasant surprise--an under-the-table tease from the beautiful pink foot of a gender-swapped Ryan!  I guess I'll call her Rianna.  Maybe Rayne would be better?

Also, does the cutaway view in the center mess up the composition?  That is, would you rather see the two characters gaze into each others' eyes without the cutaway between them?  (If so, I would move it rather than taking it out.)